If you're an aspiring writer, awesome. But if you're looking for advice, you've come to the wrong place. Given the sheer number of places to find writing tips, my only suggestion is to get a dog, give him a handful of potato chips, and have him listen as you read your work aloud to him. Believe me, he'll listen. And he'll eat up every word. Good luck. Now quit screwing around. Get back to writing!